View Full Version : [Critique]: My first photo with my first SLR
venki
04-13-2010, 06:07 PM
http://lh6.ggpht.com/_BFqIuJ17P4A/S8RlMjNbveI/AAAAAAAACq0/Yz0xQnkgLCo/s720/IMG_0509-1.JPG
This is my first photo with my canon 1000d.
Pl comment and help me to refine myself....
thanks in advance.....
KrishnenduKes
04-15-2010, 09:34 PM
Colours oversaturated. One photo is not enough to be able to say much. Post more.
Please right click on the image, copy image location and then post within the image tags!
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Bibudesh
04-16-2010, 11:33 AM
I like the shot.
Since you are looking for critics, I would love to shell out some.
Give a try to guitar solo since the attention is not concentrating on the guitar due to so many stuffs there.
Start some post processing, like adding some vignette in the side frame will make guitar grab more attention.
And as pointed by ken, the pic is high on saturation.See the curtain, u cant make the prints. I would have tried to avoid the window since its not the right time of the day and color is washed out.
Also images like these needs more sharpness. Try to get the original image right, say fine tune the camera to get max sharpness, have a proper distance from subject and set the correct aperture.
robin234
04-16-2010, 02:11 PM
I will say one thing :)
post more pictures ..if you wanna refine yourself :)
IMO giveyourself some time getting accustomed to dslr .Shoot as much as possible :)
if space is the problem ,then buy more memory cards :).
Sunny
04-16-2010, 06:45 PM
You seem to have got the composition right, which is the most important part. Now try making the photo high key.
venki
04-16-2010, 11:13 PM
Thank you all
I will definetly post some more images.
I find it little difficult to shoot indoors to get control of the dslr, will try some outdoor shots and post it.
And I am unable to have steady hand even at 1/50 or 1/60 seconds.
Is there any thing which will help me to have a steady shot other than image stabilizer?
thank you all
venki
05-22-2010, 10:42 AM
No PP done as i am very poor in PP.
go ahead and comment so i can improve........
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http://picasaweb.google.co.in/ven13in/SomeScreensaverShots#5473952240969997298
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KrishnenduKes
05-25-2010, 08:37 AM
Your photographs seem to lack a subject besides the last one which is interesting. You need to work on your composition making it powerful with a clear subject.
venki
05-31-2010, 06:39 AM
Thanks Krish....
I think i just got the technical part of the camera right, now will focus on the subjet and composition.
KrishnenduKes
05-31-2010, 08:41 AM
Thanks Krish....
I think i just got the technical part of the camera right, now will focus on the subjet and composition.
Go ahead and do it!
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