My Ptictures ~ Your Feedback

[mikon]

Some of the pictures shot by me, please provide your valuable feedback.
I am very new to photography.. hence learning!

[KrishnenduKes]

Photo Critique Approved

[shutterbug]

I like the first one.
Lovebirds just doesnt work, as I dont see any love there!
Otherwise I liked the tone of the pic.
The last one is nice, I initially thought you actually did a photo shoot of a beemer in the desert with a wide angle lens.
I see that you have added hues to the sky n all, in post. What is your post production work flow generally, if you wouldnt mind sharing it?

[mikon]

I like the first one.
Lovebirds just doesnt work, as I dont see any love there!
Otherwise I liked the tone of the pic.
The last one is nice, I initially thought you actually did a photo shoot of a beemer in the desert with a wide angle lens.
I see that you have added hues to the sky n all, in post. What is your post production work flow generally, if you wouldnt mind sharing it?

Thank you for your feedback!
Well, I kinda like the pictures with Post Production, but yes more learning and devotion decreases the involvement of PP gradually

[robin234]

Thank you for your feedback!
Well, I kinda like the pictures with Post Production, but yes more learning and devotion decreases the involvement of PP gradually

hmm no:eek:

post processing is an integral part ,as far as I'm concern :).your're the artist and its upto you what you want people to see :)
I see you have used nik colour efex :)

regarding critique
1 pic :nice
2 :nice too
3:title is wrong ,otherwise picture is cool :)

4 :nice deception :)

[Bibudesh]

@Mikon- The pictures are well composed, but the best composed shot is only the Beemer. Others are quite conventional composition.

Regarding the PP, the first three shots are overly and wrongly processed IMHO. The tones you have added to the clouds looks totally out of context. The originality is totally lost. It clearly looks like a separate selection of upper half and edited.

Editing in the love birds shot also, you have more concentrated on the effects rather than correcting the photos.The photo is lacking contrast, sharpness, exposure etc.

With the editing I can see, the basics are missing like contrast, exposure, and color .

The beemer shot is looking good due to minimal editing(read minimal effects) and good angle.
But why have u shared it as a desktop screen shot? I would prefer to see the actual jpegs.

[robin234]

what f stop are you suing for these kind of shot ??

@Bibudesh :I see its is processed in away in which sharpness is blurred out or lost :)

i@nikon :add bit of sharpness to your pictures :) .Regarding green sky ,yes I agree with bibudesh ,it looks absurd or you title it "on the other planet :)

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Infact I was going through your album and found some nice pictures :),but only problem was that you turned the Grey colour to green + horizons need to be straightened (or to be named accordingly )

[Nakul]

Did you take the pic of the beamer ? If so, why do you post that ? watching the keyboard on the pic gives this weird idea that its not your pic.. No offence.

[hitanshu]

of course not - I think its his system's pic :p

Isnt it apparent?

[mikon]

hmm no:eek:

post processing is an integral part ,as far as I'm concern :).your're the artist and its upto you what you want people to see :)
I see you have used nik colour efex :)

regarding critique
1 pic :nice
2 :nice too
3:title is wrong ,otherwise picture is cool :)

4 :nice deception :)

Thank you robin!!..Yes i used alot of colours..
Your adivse is well taken, i'll imporvise on it

[mikon]

@Mikon- The pictures are well composed, but the best composed shot is only the Beemer. Others are quite conventional composition.

Regarding the PP, the first three shots are overly and wrongly processed IMHO. The tones you have added to the clouds looks totally out of context. The originality is totally lost. It clearly looks like a separate selection of upper half and edited.

Editing in the love birds shot also, you have more concentrated on the effects rather than correcting the photos.The photo is lacking contrast, sharpness, exposure etc.

With the editing I can see, the basics are missing like contrast, exposure, and color .

The beemer shot is looking good due to minimal editing(read minimal effects) and good angle.
But why have u shared it as a desktop screen shot? I would prefer to see the actual jpegs.

Bibhudesh, excellent feedback, i'll try to improve on it.
The bmw shot is a desktop screen shot, and i wanted to click a desktop screen with the background hence the picture

[mikon]

what f stop are you suing for these kind of shot ??

@Bibudesh :I see its is processed in away in which sharpness is blurred out or lost :)

i@nikon :add bit of sharpness to your pictures :) .Regarding green sky ,yes I agree with bibudesh ,it looks absurd or you title it "on the other planet :)

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Infact I was going through your album and found some nice pictures :),but only problem was that you turned the Grey colour to green + horizons need to be straightened (or to be named accordingly )

robin!.. thanks again!
Actually these were the pictures taken on the 4th day of my camera purchase.. hence so many mistakes :(

[mikon]

of course not - I think its his system's pic :p

Isnt it apparent?

rightly said hitanshu,
That is my laptop's picture, and i wanted to click that shot, hence the picture.
Will post the picture os actual cars/bikes soon :)

[mikon]

Thank you very much guys!
I appreciate your feedback.
Here are some more pictures at your disposal!

P.S : All these pictures are clicked within a month or two after i started in interest in photography.. and this time the cars and bikes are for real ! :p

[Nakul]

of course not - I think its his system's pic :p

Isnt it apparent?

It was.. But i never thought some1 would put such a pic. I mean, we are not trying to impress one another right ? Just a matter of improving one's skills..

[Technocrat]

Mikon, great pics & it doesnt look as if they are being shot by someone new to photgraphy.

Btw where are these pics taken?

[vaishak]

hi there
great photos ....:)

[mikon]

Mikon, great pics & it doesnt look as if they are being shot by someone new to photgraphy.

Btw where are these pics taken?

Thank you very much! :)
The pics were from Singapore and Rajathan

[mikon]

hi there
great photos ....:)

Thanks a ton!

[Ruffryder]

:) hmm..mikon too good man..esp the bmx jump and the palm trees!
real sweet pictures of the bike too..

[mikon]

:) hmm..mikon too good man..esp the bmx jump and the palm trees!
real sweet pictures of the bike too..

thanks bro ! :)

[vaishak]

[i] hit us with more photographs bro :)

[mikon]

Here are some more pictures!!
Your comments please:)

[vaishak]

Here are some more pictures!!
Your comments please:)

first 2 shots are really good ...i thought its a ship first ...lol ..but its some building ..great architecture...and superb shot with your lens

[mikon]

first 2 shots are really good ...i thought its a ship first ...lol ..but its some building ..great architecture...and superb shot with your lens

Thank you sir!

[mikon]

Guys Hope you like them.
Tried to capture the monsters at the forbidden speeds :D

[Technocrat]

Nice shots again MIKON :)

Dont get me wrong but I dont see any pic being taken when any of the cars were at high speed.

[suvo]

Nice dude...But i feel some of the car pics are a bit too tightly cropped...

[vaishak]

sexy shots there friend ...where is this place actually i saw many indian reg cars ?

[mikon]

Nice shots again MIKON :)

Dont get me wrong but I dont see any pic being taken when any of the cars were at high speed.

thanks sir... not so high speeds.. but yes there were slowing down @ the corner! :D

[mikon]

Nice dude...But i feel some of the car pics are a bit too tightly cropped...

yes they are.. have removed the un necessary elements... like rickshaws, sumos..:p

[mikon]

sexy shots there friend ...where is this place actually i saw many indian reg cars ?

thanks bro... it was at mumbai... this sunday :)

[vaishak]

thanks bro... it was at mumbai... this sunday :)

cant believe its mumbai ..i felt like aboard :)

[mikon]

Please find some pictures .. your feedbacks please :)

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[vaishak]

Please find some pictures .. your feedbacks please :)

the last 3 shots a nice bro ...

[KrishnenduKes]

I edited your post for the photos to show. I liked 5 and 7. Especially liked the angle of 7. You could have shot really nice photographs of Paris. That horseman came a cropper!

[suvo]

Nice pics...I really liked shot 5...

Nice variation in the sky in shot 6...maybe i would have liked to see the pic taken from another angle...

[mikon]

the last 3 shots a nice bro ...

Thank you sir :)

[mikon]

I edited your post for the photos to show. I liked 5 and 7. Especially liked the angle of 7. You could have shot really nice photographs of Paris. That horseman came a cropper!

Thank you sir :)
I've different shots of Paris, I will upload.

I did not see any changes where you edited the post

[mikon]

Nice pics...I really liked shot 5...

Nice variation in the sky in shot 6...maybe i would have liked to see the pic taken from another angle...

Thanks bro :)

[mikon]

Here are some more pictures at your feedback disposal !

[vaishak]

Here are some more pictures at your feedback disposal !

i liked the last one ..its pretty good

[KrishnenduKes]

Here are some more pictures at your feedback disposal !

The Louvre photograph is an excellent composition. Mme Tussaud's somehow does not impress me. About the Eiffel tower, what can I say, it is not easy to shoot it well. There always too many people around... and to get a decent photograph, you have to work really hard to find the "essence" of the Eiffel tower! But you did a very good job of the Louvre.

[mikon]

The Louvre photograph is an excellent composition. Mme Tussaud's somehow does not impress me. About the Eiffel tower, what can I say, it is not easy to shoot it well. There always too many people around... and to get a decent photograph, you have to work really hard to find the "essence" of the Eiffel tower! But you did a very good job of the Louvre.

Thank you sir :)
Yes quite true... there was a mad crowd around the eiffel.

[mikon]

i liked the last one ..its pretty good

thanks bro :)

[KrishnenduKes]

Thank you sir :)
Yes quite true... there was a mad crowd around the eiffel.

Can you give us the Exif of the shots that you have clicked please?

Besides, I am sure you would have clicked other shots of the Eiffel and the Louvre. Could you show us some more? And give the Exif as well along with them. Thanks!