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zwaltek
09-30-2009, 11:31 PM
a friend swimmer in his room, los angeles.
what do you think ?

http://www.nopsir.org/public/img/matthieu_09/09/lm8_090922_006.jpg

Sunny
10-01-2009, 01:07 PM
Topic Approved

Very nice contrast. Although I would like to see more muscle definition which is being washed out due to light right now. Otherwise very nice feel and tones.

Xavier
10-01-2009, 06:06 PM
The coldtone preset in Lightroom, Emile? ;)
I agree with sunny that the swimmer's back has lost detail and is now looking like a CGI image, something straight out of a Frank Miller graphic novel. And I pretty much like this look.

zwaltek
10-02-2009, 12:01 AM
i do agree with you about the lack of def on his back.
i was thinking about bringing some contrast on it.
Thanks for your critiques :)

KrishnenduKes
10-02-2009, 08:34 PM
I like this kind of creative work. Reminds me of "Sin City". However I personally am not gutsy enough to try out this kind of work and experiments!

anvancy-(macro analyst)
10-03-2009, 01:00 PM
striking shot zwaltek.showing of winner status and confidence.

my only crib is the noise/texture that is there on his lower back.i personally will keep it clean.

but hey its ur shot.:)

serious nice work.

anvancy