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BANDHAV
05-16-2009, 08:36 PM
I am posting few pics from my last visit to this moument of love, i have overprocessed them for certain dramatic feeling, but i would love to receive critique on both the front, photography as well as PPing.So, Here we go:
http://i39.tinypic.com/23katrp.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2pyx2qw.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2v26vlw.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/newyhk.jpg
KrishnenduKes
05-16-2009, 10:06 PM
Photo Critique Approved
Nice clicks there. Which camera? Exif?
I do not think that they are "overprocessed". N°3 has some noise in the sky. And N°1 can be more cropped in the sky. There is another thing that I wanted to mention; straight horizons have a better feel about them. And symmetrical monuments need their symmetries to be shown. Cutaways of perfect symmetries look awkward unless there is something "interesting" happening.
Aryan
05-16-2009, 10:27 PM
The second shot is good Bandhav! :)
KrishnenduKes
05-17-2009, 10:11 AM
The second shot is good Bandhav! :)
I agree with that one. I know exactly where it is shot from. There are Taj ASI employees who take people to such spots to shoot and then ask for money. I don't know if Bandhav was part of such an exercise.
I like the 4th one as well in B/W.
anvancy-(macro analyst)
05-17-2009, 11:10 AM
the first and last shot have really come out nice.as ken said crop the sky.dont make it a square shot but reduce the sky a tinch.
the no3 seems awkward though to me.
anvancy.
BANDHAV
05-18-2009, 09:31 AM
Man i am overwhelmed, its good to learn that you liked the pics.
@kenda: No i didnt hire any guide as i was too busy clciking pics for my entire 5 hour visit, and the pic is clicked from inside the Taj mosque, by the way i did cause a lot of discomfort to some love birds by getting in some real akward positions for clicking pics.
As far as the pic no 3 is concerned i was trying to get a frame sort of effect by clicking through one of the window.
KrishnenduKes
05-18-2009, 10:07 AM
Man i am overwhelmed, its good to learn that you liked the pics.
Nothing to be overwhelmed about. I have been telling you for months that you should take pictures more often and work on your potential.
@kenda: No i didnt hire any guide as i was too busy clciking pics for my entire 5 hour visit, and the pic is clicked from inside the Taj mosque,
I know. This shot can be taken from just two places inside the complex. Hats off to you for finding this place on your own!
BANDHAV
05-18-2009, 10:14 AM
@kenda: Thanks for poking my lazy ar$e to get up and post something here.
BANDHAV
05-19-2009, 09:23 AM
Thanks Suvo, i am glad that you liked it.
the first and last shot have really come out nice.as ken said crop the sky.dont make it a square shot but reduce the sky a tinch.
the no3 seems awkward though to me.
anvancy.
Square shots are awesome. Medium format ftw! :D
Nice efforts, Bandhav. I can clearly see your evolution as a photographer. A bit more care in framing would make them awesome shots, as others suggested here. Don't worry, there are tonnes of free resources on the net that will give you tips.
BANDHAV
05-19-2009, 12:03 PM
Nice efforts, Bandhav. I can clearly see your evolution as a photographer.
Coming from you it really mean something. Thanks.
Bibudesh
05-19-2009, 01:24 PM
Lovely shots bandhav. I like it more due to uncoventional angles and the framing. The PP is also really good.
Keep sharing.
BTW which cam did u use?
BANDHAV
05-19-2009, 03:48 PM
Thanks SP, as of now i dont own a camera, these pics were clicked using a Canon Powershot 590 IS, these days i am clicking with Canon S3 IS, whcih aryan has lend me as it was lying unused with him.
rio008
05-27-2009, 12:36 PM
Thanks SP, as of now i dont own a camera, these pics were clicked using a Canon Powershot 590 IS, these days i am clicking with Canon S3 IS, whcih aryan has lend me as it was lying unused with him.
Good shoots mr.bandhav, love the last one(love that classical touch).
keep clicking ;)
arijit
09-02-2009, 07:56 PM
i liked all the clicks but i dont know why 3rd shot appealed most to me. its awkward to be the only one responding positively to a pic considered awkward...lolz. though i am very much inexperienced to give any expert comment, personally i felt the third shot to be quite creative...only it needs a bit cropping !
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