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archistar
02-24-2009, 10:54 PM
'FLOWERS' - which can make us happy anytime.

Captured all these at a road-side flower shop. Thanks a ton to the humble owner who entertained me for more than an hour.

#1
http://www.thephotographer.in/darkroom/picture.php?albumid=7&pictureid=18

#2
http://www.thephotographer.in/darkroom/picture.php?albumid=7&pictureid=20

#3
http://www.thephotographer.in/darkroom/picture.php?albumid=7&pictureid=19

#4
http://www.thephotographer.in/darkroom/picture.php?albumid=7&pictureid=17
KrishnenduKes
02-24-2009, 11:00 PM
Critique Approved

Keep up the effort Archi. But I feel that you are capable of Much better.
archistar
02-24-2009, 11:03 PM
Critique Approved

Keep up the effort Archi. But I feel that you are capable of Much better.

Thanks Ken Da.... :)
'll get something better in the next attempt...
Devil.DJ
02-25-2009, 04:25 AM
I Cant see the photographs.. :(

is it me only ???


DJ
powerslave
02-25-2009, 04:49 AM
Me netiher.
Aryan
02-25-2009, 12:27 PM
Thanks a ton! Now the pictures are visible.. :) :)
Xavier
02-25-2009, 12:42 PM
Yup, they are visible now :)
Thanks Ken.

As far as C&C, here are my views.

1. The best of the lot. Liked it.
2. Does nothing for me. No specific area of interest in the pic.
3. Too underexposed IMO.
4. Same as Pic 2. And image is not sharp enough :(
Vicky
02-25-2009, 12:51 PM
Finally I can see the pics now:)

#1 is the best... love the angle and creative crop, #2 is also good, rest are average.

However, all are pretty underexposed:(

@Ken : Why not delete the OT's now:)
KrishnenduKes
02-25-2009, 01:21 PM
@Ken : Why not delete the OT's now:)

Was doing it. Done now!
archistar
02-25-2009, 06:31 PM
@all: Thanks a ton for your critics... it was my first encounter with the 50mm 1.8
let me get another encounter there again ;)

the first one is with Raynox 250 and uncropped...
Devil.DJ
02-26-2009, 12:27 AM
Thanks Ken. :)


Loved the first shot. Keep clicking.

Cheers,
DJ
KrishnenduKes
02-26-2009, 07:00 AM
Hence, going by the general comments received so far, we do notice that the photograph taken with the Raynox is the one which is most liked.
archistar
02-27-2009, 01:43 PM
as that pic was handheld, i think more sharpness can be gained with tripod... let me try in next attempt...